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Sunday, 3 January 2021

The Numinous Personage-Rukhsar Shafi

Book: The Numinous Personage
Author: Rukhsar Shafi
Publisher: Pblishing.com

What is the best fantasy book you have read?

The Numinous Personage by Rukhsar Shafi is based in Beaumont Valley where some strange events have started occurring. Jenay Lambert was living a perfect life until her mother remarries. And things started happening in the town. Her bestfriend’s boyfriend disappears, and a new boy with golden eyes comes to town. As the truth starts unravelling, she realizes that it is just the beginning and secrets start tumbling out from the annals of history.

The plot of the book is quite promising with mythical creatures, romance, and teenagers. The concept of the book is well thought of, with a fantasy series in the making. The problem in the book is that a lot of filler has been used, and the actual story starts forming only after almost half the book is over. This creates a blurry plotline and hence the experience gets diluted. The events in the book could have been better sketched which could have explained the Celtic mythology and their significance in the book. There are some grammatical issues in the book as well, which again dilute the overall experience of the book. The climax is quite pacy, and while I felt it was a bit knee-jerk and confusing, it does establish the book and I hope that the further books are better.

The characters in the book are almost half-sketched with their backstories not very clear the manner in which they are told. Jen and Ace, according to me, were the best sketched in terms of detailing and the story of why they do the things they do. The same cannot be said for the others, though. Shay, Grace, Peter, etc. had a great potential, and that could have been explored a bit to strengthen the storyline as well. The mythical creatures make fleeting appearances, though that should have come in the forefront.

Overall, a good book that could have been better. It scores a 3/5 for me.

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