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Friday, 14 May 2021

Nightwatchman Pvt Ltd-Naveen Kundra

Book: Nightwatchman Pvt Ltd
Author: Naveen Kundra
Publisher: Notion Press

What is the one thing that inspires innovation?

Nightwatchman Pvt Ltd by Naveen Kundra opens on the 24th of May when Dhan Nagri wakes up to the news that a shocking incident has taken place, and a killer is on the loose, putting the lives of the citizens at risk. As the pressure mounts on the CM Yudhisthir Sanghvi to find a solution, the city comes to a grinding halt. In one part of the city, Sanjay Dhingra is preparing for his imminent arrest as his brainchild Nightwatchman Pvt Ltd is the centre of a larger-than-life drama and he now left to face the music. In another part of the city, his rival Khsirsagar is planning something sinister, and the love of his life has shacked up with someone powerful. This is the story of a rum-drinking entrepreneur that delves deep into the innards of power, seduction, espionage, and forgery. Can Sanjay, who has nothing to lose, gain everything?

The idea of the book to introduce and discuss the problems an entrepreneur faces is quite innovative. Naveen has taken up the concept and placed it in an imaginary world, where locations are recognizable, yet it is completely fictional. The storytelling has a parallel track, and that adds to the mystery element in the book, but that is also the thing that goes against it. The storytelling is quite slow, and the premise of the plot gets clear well after the second half and that could deter readers from moving ahead. One thing that didn’t work for me were the editing and proofreading errors that led to a lot of spelling and grammar issues which reduced the reading experience further. The story is extremely detailed, and the intentions of the characters do make sense in the way they were doing what they were doing, but that takes up quite a bit of time. Another thing that didn’t work for me was that the innovation and its subsequent revelation did not live up to its hype and I expected it to be a bit better. The climax could have been executed well and compared to the story, did not live up to the expectations.

Coming to the characters, Naveen has created an interesting set of characters for the story. Sanjay’s character is well plotted, and his character arc is well sketched. I loved the fact his spontaneous decision making and the fact that he did what he did to make his venture a success. His presence of mind is well articulated and well presented. Chandra and Ruhi are two characters I found quite complex and the way in which each of their arcs goes makes the plot interesting and readable. Other characters such as Khsirsagar, Yudhisthir etc. are relatable as well and people like them can be seen around us.

Overall, a good book that can improve with a second round of editing and proofreading. It scores a 3.5/5 for me.

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