Author: Dyumani
Publisher: Self Published
The Pandora’s Box was Left Open by Dyumani is the story of a star
detective Om and his protégé Shiv. As they journey through the trials and
tribulations of crime-solving, their paths intersect not just professionally,
but personally as well. Known to have a perfect track record, there is a secret
that Om keeps, and there are skeletons in Shiv’s closet that he would rather
not unravel. The question is, would these two be able to keep their secrets
hidden?
The idea to explore an Indian detective with
an uncanny sense of solving crimes is an interesting one. The book aims to
explore the idea and create a pair of formidable detectives which could have
been a successful attempt, however the book has, at best, a flimsy plot that
moves too fast and the depth of substance is missing. The author started well
by setting up the context and a sub-plot as well, but lost the plot somewhere
and the book seems hurriedly written. The criminal cases are solved too soon to
add anything to either the plot or the characters. Another issue with the book
is that of editing and grammar. There are serious editorial issues in terms of
language, spellings and sentence construction which further reduce the reading
experience. The climax, however, redeems the plot somehow with an unforeseen
twist.
Coming to the characters, the book explores
primarily 2 people-Shiv and Om. While we see bits and pieces of character arcs
emerging, a major part of them is quite flat and not much exploration or
development can be seen. Om as a detective with an impressive track record does
get some recognition in the plot, but it could have been much better treated.
Harish’s character seems important with the climax, but I would have loved to
see a bit more of him because going by the current character sketches, he would
be almost as good as a new character if he makes an appearance in the sequel.
Overall, a book that held promise but could
have been better. The book scores a 2.75/5 for me.
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